Kia ora Connor. My name is Riley and I attend Gisborne school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I really like the detail in your writing. Next time maybe you could use google docs to write your writing. Good job
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Kia ora Connor. My name is Riley and I attend Gisborne school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I really like the detail in your writing. Next time maybe you could use google docs to write your writing. Good job
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